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in the slammer with carol smith
++BY HORTENSE CALISHER
An academic critic has complained that reviewers of Calisher's work "invariably dive into the same adjectival pool and surface with a handful of epithets." And so must I to describe "In the Slammer with Carol Smith." Her latest novel really is "convoluted" and "dense" and "elliptical." The title character gradually puts together the pieces of her mind after a trauma; she wanders, practically homeless, through the streets of New York and between the fragments of her own personality. From sentence to sentence, Calisher's prose can make unusual demands on a reader's concentration. I only wish it rewarded the effort more consistently. Carol Smith's story unfolds through the nonlinear amblings of memory. Years ago, she was part of a group of student radicals -- poor little rich girls in Boston -- who decide to set off a bomb. While it is being assembled, Carol goes out to get everybody lunch. The bomb goes off accidentally. The survivors scatter. Carol alone ends up in jail and, later, at a psychiatric facility. At the start of the book, she is in a chemical daze, living on disability in a cockroach-infested New York apartment. She drifts around, and ends up apartment-sitting for a South African émigré. By the end of the book, Carol has reclaimed much of her lost self, and there is a chance that the two of them can begin a life together. Carol Smith's slender and difficult connection with the people around her, and with her own past, are artfully shown. The sentences link up in oblique ways -- just as the impressions on the narrator's mind do. For a dozen pages, it is dazzling. Twenty more, and it becomes tiring. Then, about halfway through the novel, comes a paragraph that belongs in some anthology of hopelessly overwrought prose:
Down these old commercial blocks the hairy air is lion-colored, with tinsel sparks at the warehouse cornices. This is that other sunset the city gets no credit for. One the skyscrapers will never see. A slanting magic, folk art comfortable. Like I'm in the bowl of a worn but gilded spoon.
Whereupon I had to put the book down for a while, until the pain subsided. That much purple is bad for the retina.
Scott McLemee is a contributing editor at Lingua Franca. He writes regularly for Salon. |